Cafe event reflection and evaluation (Part 1)

Write a reflection and evaluate my role (My role work as barista to make coffee and drinks) for school cafe event. I have drafted my points in the attached document, I would like to rewrite it in a more professional way and fix my grammar and structure. I have difficulties in organising the process, please help me construct my paragraph better. Thanks

– write in first person (self-experience)
– my cooperation with my partner barista & the register

Thanks.

Discuss ways in which an event or circumstance at work has affected your approach to or understanding of a specific aspect of your job.

Assignment 1: The Analytical Essay
Instructions
On The following topic, develop an analytical essay of 500 to 600 words, following the steps outlined in the readings and activities of Unit 1.
Your essay will be marked on the following elements: clear thesis, main points that support the thesis, good use of detail to explain and illustrate your main points, smooth transitions between paragraphs, coherent, unified, and well-developed paragraphs, introduction and conclusion that signal the beginning and ending of the essay both in content and tone, grammatically correct sentences, accurate word choices, standard spelling and punctuation. You may wish to refer to a handbook such as one of those listed in \”Supplemental Resources\” for guidelines to standard grammar, spelling, and punctuation.
Topic:
1. Discuss ways in which an event or circumstance at work has affected your approach to or understanding of a specific aspect of your job.
Criteria for Marking Assignment 1
80100%
o Clear thesis
o Good analytical organization
o Originality and/or sophistication, often expressed via specific examples and complex sentence style and diction
o Subtle understanding and expression of content
o No basic grammar errors
7079%
o Clear thesis
o Reasonably good analytical organization
o Good understanding of content, with evidence of some originality and sophistication at the top end of the scale
o Infrequent grammar errors
6069%
o Reasonable thesis, tending, at the bottom of the scale, to lack a conceptual edge
o Tendency to fall into narrative or descriptive mode, but some evidence of analytical structure
o Somewhat less original or unsophisticated details or generalizations
o Some grammatical errors, but the essay demonstrates a grasp of the fundamentals of sentence structure
5059%
o No real thesis, but the essay hangs together
o Ineffective use of analytical structure; inability to present main ideas
o Trite or simplistic details or generalizations
Writing Handbooks and Workbooks
A writing handbook is a recommended resource that you can use not only in ENGL 1101 but also as a reference when writing any assignment or other writing task. Any of the following handbooks is recommended. In addition, many handbooks have accompanying workbooks for further practice in basic writing and grammar skills; you may want to acquire one of these as well:
Hodges, John C., et al. Harbrace Handbook for Canadians. 6th ed. Scarborough: Nelson, 2003.
Connor, William. Harbrace Workbook for Canadians. 6th ed. Scarborough: Nelson, 2003.
Aaron, Jane E., and Murray McArthur. The Little, Brown Compact Handbook. 3rd Canadian ed. Toronto: Pearson, 2006.
Aaron, Jane E., Murray McArthur, and Kathryn McArthur. Exercises to Accompany The Little, Brown Compact Handbook. 3rd Canadian ed. Toronto: Pearson, 2006.
Harris, Muriel, and Judi Jewinski. Prentice Hall Reference Guide for Canadian Writers. Toronto: Pearson, 2009.

Politics – Yesterday, Today, and Tomorrow

Write a three to four (3-4) page paper in which the student answers the following three (3) items using headers to separate each item:
Discuss either two (2) civil liberties or two (2) civil rights events (past or current) that have influenced a sense of social responsibility in the American government today. Provide examples to support your answer. Note: In your response, consider how the events influenced the way state, local or national political leaders or agencies responded in a socially responsible or ethical manner toward the community.
Discuss two (2) media events (past or present) that have positively and or negatively influenced the publics opinion of a government agency. Provide examples to support your answer. Note: Consider how a news story or media coverage of an event positively or negatively changed the publics opinion (or perception) regarding how responsible a government agency should be towards meeting the needs of its customers; i.e. the American people.
Discuss two (2) differences between the Republican and Democratic parties that may have an ethical impact (positively or negatively) on the American people. Provide examples to support your answer. Note: Consider the different ideals, values, morals, and/or goals held by the Republican and Democratic parties, and their different views on the ethically or morally right way to govern and make the best policies for the people they serve. Determine if your example presents any type of ethical concerns for or against the public interest of the American people.

Similarities Between Alice Walker and Mohja Kahf Poems

Alice Walker writes about the Afro-American struggle and Mohja Kahf writes about Arab-American woman role and the victimization and discrimination she faces in society.
What are the similarities between Alice Walker and Mohja Kahf poems? Review two poems for each poet in the light of the above points.

Explain why voice of the customer carries much more insight into churn analysis and prevention.

Imagine that you are a marketing executive at a major telecommunication company that has been facing the issue of increased customer churn recently. You are using traditional analytical methods with financial and location data to construct a predictive model for customer churn. However, you want to leverage memo data that has been obtained from the customer contact center and local sells stores. You also believe that the Web blogs and posts contain very important information that you could use to attack customer churn. Examining the unstructured data and the structured data together may provide more insight on why customers want to leave one company and join another company.

Write a four to five (4-5) page paper in which you:

Evaluate the importance of unstructured data in the churn analysis.
List other structured and unstructured data other than the memo and Web blogs that you need to use in your churn analysis.
Propose a series of steps for deriving a predictive model using text and Web analytics. Provide at least one (1) example of how the process can be integrated in the modeling process using structured data.
Identify at least two (2) technologies that you can use to construct the predictive model and highlight their pros and cons.
Explain why voice of the customer carries much more insight into churn analysis and prevention.
Suggest at least one (1) churn prevention method that you can use to reduce your churn rate based on your model.